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Jake Borchardt's avatar

I am very much enjoying this chapter. The deep wonder, promise, your explanational insight put into dialogue is so full of sacred wisdom. I really enjoy the lucid/vivid colorations and scenery. I feel like this is the space where crossing from mental construct finds beyond, essence and purity, the un named consciousness unseen and woven into experience, sense and there to explore. Im likely not making good sense, when I try to desribe, I ussually write it out and stare at it until I find the way I think I can desribe accurately.

This chapter excites me for what's next. The archway, ancient symbols, and a threshold crossed. Brilliant storytelling, full of awareness, wisdom.

like reading a medicine journey in storyform.

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Chera DeHoff's avatar

Jake, thank you. I started writing this years ago, when my children were very young, in an effort to get them to read. It is based on my magical adventures I would have with a 1st grade class-mate - we would tell stories of great imagination that brought us into these worlds. At the time I wrote the original manuscript, I would dream journey - so - there's that. :)

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